Today Phil challenge me and Melnina to make a poem we could do other challenge's but we chose to do a poetry challenge. We are doing a haiku a haiku is basically a poem with 5 syllables 7 syllables and than 5 syllables again. We are doing this so we can challenge you people's brain's good luck!
Awesome challenge. My haiku is about a hawk (kahu):
ReplyDeleteGliding through the sky
Eyes searching for its next prey
Swooping with sharp claws
Hi Zera. I liked your post because it tells us what kind of challenge to do. It reminded me of my other school. Maybe next time you could put more information Here is my poem on my blog https://mrsmatthewv.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHello Zera i like your poem keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHi. This is my poem. Hope you like it. https://mrsangelso.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi. Here is my poem. https://mrslarat.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi zera and melina i liked your post because there so creative and imaginative and so hard. it reminded me of the time when i was in my little class rm 10 i did a poem for the school i think i did and next time please make something even harder for me p.s it took me 10 whole minutes to do this ok see you later
ReplyDeletethis was a good challenge to me.
ReplyDeletegiraffes are so tall
giraffes eat leaves from the tree
They live in the zoo
Hi Zera my name is Rico from RM 24. I really liked your idea about doing a Haiku poem. It reminded me when we did a Haiku poem this year. Mine was about a Compass but I don't remember It. Come check out my Blog at http://odsricor.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHello Rico Thank you for the comment! Good Haiku poem about the compass! blog you later!
DeleteKIA ORA my name is Oshani. I am in Room 24 at Owairaka School.
ReplyDeleteI really like you blog post about poems. Thanks for sharing your learning.
Blog you later.
Kia ora, my name is Taito at Owairaka District School from Rm23. I really loved your blog post about poems. I remember I did something like this. Was it challenging for you? You should check out my blog at https://odsmaok.blogspot.com/ Blog ya later
ReplyDeleteBlog out-Taito😁